Coo'. o-O

...that 'pig's wings' thinger in your deviation desc almost made my brain implode. D:

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity.

Huh. I thought you lost your brain a long time ago...

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs

That's most definately a poem . It sounds great when spoken aloud / thought aloud in the head, as I do; I especially liked how you put 'transcending' in there, but that's just me .

I really liked this (as well!); but the third stanza seemed a bit awkward compared to the rest of it. I *think* (not entirely sure myself, but this is my hunch) it's because there are too many monosyllabic words in there, and not enough two-syllable words. Both third and fourth have that pattern, and I liked the first two better than those two; having more two-syllable words helps create that rhythm, and almost 'ticking' sound in my mind as it is read aloud that makes it so appealing to me.

Well, I *think* that's it. It half-makes sense to me, but half doesn't. Meh, if that makes sense to you feel free to take it on board, if not, take 'em as the ramblings of a madman .

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Life is creation; creation is life.

That could be true.. o-o;
I guess its just the empty brainless patch of air inside my skull swirling around and givving the illusion of a near 'brain implosion'..

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity.

This one was actually inspired by your poetry rant XD Well, like I said in the description, it just hit me and I spit it out. I would edit it now except I'm kind of busy and only checking dA real quick. Any way thank you for the suggestions, and it half-made sense to me, too. Although the other half seems like ramblings of a madman. But I'm not exactly sane myself - So we'll figure something out! XD

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs

Oh. I figured maybe you lost your mind - as in the ability to think reasonably - but maybe you still have half a brain in there or something.

I love how I can make stupid things sound intelligent! =3

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs

Isnt it great? xP

Hm.. Maybe i got a cell or two.. and they work when they hit a wall.. which is why i only have really short moments where i decide to show actual intelligence. =/

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity.

Lol, woot! My rant had a hand in the creation of something worthwhile! Lol.

XD By our madness combined... and that's where my memory of Captain Planet, and hence any parody of it, ends .

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Life is creation; creation is life.

Captain Planet EATS children! =O

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs