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Satan's Kingdom Hall by !aviator4000:iconaviator4000:





Ethereal links, clink, clink,
Into the made-up ditches sink,
Walking with our ankles chained
Into the house of sanity's bane

Circular turns, learn, learn,
Our minds by repetition burn,
No repentance for our kind,
Beneath the palace of man's lost mind

Amplified yells, sell, sell,
Hypnotized by ringing bell,
Lies of freedom, buy it all,
When you visit Satan's Kingdom Hall
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Author's Comments

Came up with the idea behind this poem from a conversation with my mother about public school which was too long and boring to repeat here. "Satan's Kingdom Hall" comes from a random thought about a friend who's into so many dark things even though she's a Jehovah's Witness, and then for some reason I started thinking about satanists and what if satanism was as big a religion as Christianity with all sorts of branches and faiths all over the world, and somehow the thoughts all came together and I imagined a school complex with the name "Satan's Kingdom Hall".

The original name of the poem was "Sanity's Bane".

::Edit:: changed the last line back to what it originally was. I had changed it because it didn't fit because there was like ONE to many syllable but what the heck I like it better this way :P

::Edit2:: Fixed it! Yay me!

::Edit3:: Apparently when I fixed it I actually messed it up but NOW I fixed it and I think this is the final edit (thank God) @_@;

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:iconnocturnalkitten:
Two words;
...Fuck - You.

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity. :heart:
:iconthakilla101:
I digress, those cookies tasted nice
:iconaviator4000:
Watch your mouth.

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
:iconaviator4000:
Dunno what you're talking about, but its makes more sense than kitten's comment x_X; -spent the past hour trying to figure out why "fuck you" was said-

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
:iconnocturnalkitten:
Sorry..
Misunderstanding aside..
This poem sounds cool. :P

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity. :heart:
:iconaviator4000:
lawl XD

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
:iconnocturnalkitten:
^w^;

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity. :heart:
:iconevergreenrose:
I really liked this! ^^ Pretty much exactly the stuff I said I like in my random poetry rant; aestheticism, and deeper meaning / opportunity for analysing closer. Love it! Side-effect of that is I don't have any suggestions for you, but ah well :P.

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Life is creation; creation is life.
:iconaviator4000:
Haha! This has made my day =3

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs

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