Mirror, mirror on the wall
Saw them slaughtered, one and all
Ashes, ashes, down they fall,
The Wishing Well is calling!
It calls for blood, it calls for bone,
Deceives a soul from broken home,
It's thirst my master must atone,
The Wishing Well is calling!
A perfect skull to end the feast
Demanded by this wicked beast
Soon I will fly free, to the East,
But The Wishing Well is calling!















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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity.
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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity.
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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity.
Only thing I don't like is the line:
"Soon I will fly free, to the East,"
It's got 8 syllables like all the other lines, but the comma breaks up the rhythm that the previous two lines established. It was going "Tick tick tick tick..." but in that line it goes "Tick tick - tick tick..." Not sure how you'd do it, but maybe find some way of rejigging that to remove the comma.
Other than that, very good!
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Life is creation; creation is life.
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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
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Buffy: Angel
Angel: Buffy
Xander: Xander
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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
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