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Mirror, mirror on the wall
Saw them slaughtered, one and all
Ashes, ashes, down they fall,
The Wishing Well is calling!

It calls for blood, it calls for bone,
Deceives a soul from broken home,
It's thirst my master must atone,
The Wishing Well is calling!

A perfect skull to end the feast
Demanded by this wicked beast
Soon I will fly free, to the East,
But The Wishing Well is calling!
©2007-2009 !aviator4000
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Inspired by :icontrueloveiseternal:'s contest: [link]

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:iconnocturnalkitten:
Funky. :P

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity. :heart:
:iconaviator4000:
You sound like Ryan.

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
:iconnocturnalkitten:
Freakish.:O_o:

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity. :heart:
:iconaviator4000:
I don't know. You two have been together for a while now. I say things that sound like Paul a lot of times :P

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
:iconnocturnalkitten:
Nice. :D

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Take the hand of the reaper and follow him to eternity. :heart:
:iconevergreenrose:
Oooh, I really like this; it's got good imagery, luvverly meter and rhythm and just everything! ^_^

Only thing I don't like is the line:
"Soon I will fly free, to the East,"

It's got 8 syllables like all the other lines, but the comma breaks up the rhythm that the previous two lines established. It was going "Tick tick tick tick..." but in that line it goes "Tick tick - tick tick..." Not sure how you'd do it, but maybe find some way of rejigging that to remove the comma.

Other than that, very good!

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Life is creation; creation is life.
:iconaviator4000:
Thanks =3

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs
:iconinsanity-streak:
ooohhh very ominous and creepy! i love the traditional sort of story lines you use like mirror, mirror and blood and bone. it makes it seem almost like a wicked nursery rhyme that you'd tell your children if you didn't want them to do something! but its chilling and creepy and totally fits the contest cover too!

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Buffy: Angel
Angel: Buffy
Xander: Xander
:iconaviator4000:
So many compliments are undeserved but not unwelcome! :P

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eccentric: a person with an unusual or odd personality or set of beliefs

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